This is fantastic. I have to pause here and get back to work, but I'll be reading the rest of over the course of the next few days with pleasure.
You have a marvelous style: clear, organized, logical and yet also light, humorous. I was delighted by the structure of your plot, by the way each detail provided meaning, and also grateful for the insights into astronomy!
Each line of dialogue is frankly astoundingly precise and of the character; there were also some extremely interesting exchanges, such as when Spock speaks of Vulcan in the past tense. All of the Kirk/Spock/McCoy exchanges were fabulous, actually. I can't wait to read more. :)
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Date: 2009-10-22 06:14 am (UTC)You have a marvelous style: clear, organized, logical and yet also light, humorous. I was delighted by the structure of your plot, by the way each detail provided meaning, and also grateful for the insights into astronomy!
Each line of dialogue is frankly astoundingly precise and of the character; there were also some extremely interesting exchanges, such as when Spock speaks of Vulcan in the past tense. All of the Kirk/Spock/McCoy exchanges were fabulous, actually. I can't wait to read more. :)